2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Online Shopping is popular with us now.It is good for us.example for we could use little money and buy many good things.we may encounter some cheat。 It has some trouble for us as well.we may buy some flash goods.My advise is look before your leap.