单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;文章层次较为清晰。
Amy is my best friend.She is my classmate,and I think she is a cute girl.She has long hair and big eyes. All of our classmate say we are so like .And I think so . Amy like reading and listening music,she say when she doing it,will feel happy,and reading make her claim.