小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累。

i have a good friend,she name's dengjiali，she's 23 years old,she from to chengdu,sichuan,China, she have a beatiful hair,she's very very very cute,i like with go to KTV,she is best girl, i love she very so much,she's love me very so much,today i happy so much.she likes reading books,she is also nice,she ofter helps us,our classmate like her very much