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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦160:计算机

发布时间:2015-08-28 16:16浏览次数:1435
要求:
如今计算机已成为人们生活的重要部分,请你就计算机过去和现在的变化写一篇短文。字数不少于70。
提示:有很好的内存,记性比人好;以前的又大又重,只能做简单的事;
现在的又小又轻,运转得又快又好;电脑现在越来越流行。已经成为人们日常工作和生活的重要部分。
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
评语:

从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;衔接成分偏少。

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The computers have played a very important part in our every life.But do you know anything about the first computer?The first computer was invented in the US.Its size was really large.It is as large as a room.Of cause it weighed over thirty tons,so you can imagine that using it is a very difficult thing.This large and heavy computer could just do some easy work.But now,computers have changed a lot.They don't large anymore.People can put them into their bags easily,today's computers work well.It becomes more and more popular.In a developed country,people have their own computers.The computers have become an important part of people's daily life.

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