过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏。
I have a good friend.He is very tall and hunmam. He like play basktball,mee too.He often drive car go to arboud.He is a singer and drawing.He doesn't sleeping and swimming.He have a white car.It is buteaful,but he don't drve it now. He go to wrok on foot.He said that sport is good for live.