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How to use money wisely? As a student we do not have the ability to earn all the money that we need.We may depend on our parents to continue our college and our daily life.So there comes the question that how to use our money wisely?As far as i'm concrened,it's that buy the things you really need. Many people hold the uponion that we should buy things only when there are discounts and use less money to buy the most goods which are with high quality.It's ture that you can save some money in this way.however,you may also spend extra money and means nothingTthe question is that you may buy some thing in discount but you really have no use with them,and these become a kind of waste,not only you money but also you time and energe So we should save money in a wise way not just do worse things with good heart.