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2011年12月3日雅思写作真题:The Food Travel Debate

发布时间:2013-07-25 16:15浏览次数:975
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【题目要求

Today food travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

【题目翻译】

今天食品运输需要的很长的距离,为什么?这种趋势是好还是不好?

【题目解析】

解题思路:原因分析 + 利弊讨论

食品:水果和粮食:

原因:有些地方没有生产的条件 + 例证

大的农场一般离城市较远

利好:长途运输客观上使得相关产业繁荣

消费者可以享受到应季的食品

弊端:运营成本的增加必然提高产品的价格,增加消费者的消费负担

运输时间长,食品可能出现腐烂的现象

运输过程中可以产生大量的空气污染和噪音污染

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Nowadays food supply has become one of the most prosperous industry which pushing the economic growth. Thanks to the ever-growing technology, people are now could taste different food from all around the world by plane, train, ship and other high tech transportation. However, those food transport systems inevitably increase the pollution by burning feul.So leave us a serious question to be answer, should we keep benefiting our desire by sacrificing our planet? For the whole industry supported by food transport and the one by producing those food, it's rather benigh to hold the idea of supporting the entire industry since people could see benefits from it. Firstly, with the business, more people are getting employment inclulding those farmers , porters, drivers. in additon, life is gettng better for those people who could manage to deal with food transport since people are eagers to try out exostic products. On top of that, with all these, customers dont need to go out and seek for the things that from a remote place. However fatasitci

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