2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. First,I want to play the Online Game all day,you know,I like play game very much,I need some free time to relaxed.Next,I will go to some beautiful places,because I stayed in school so long,It was boring.Finally,I decide to compeny with my parents,becasue I spent less time to them when I was studying in school. Yous, David