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My best friend GunLee who is from American will visit me in next week, Suzhou is a beautiful city as it have 3000 years old, First i will introduce Gun lee to the garden park of zhuozhengyuan, because the garden park is the famous sight in suzhou,or we can say the old garden park in suzhou is it symptom . Then i will take Gun to Jinji lake , Jin ji lake with buautyfull night sight .