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with the development of society,more and more peole are used to make a choice fisrt wihout no secents or mintues. it is very unwise to make a clousion at the site of something. on one thing ,the perface are always very simlple ,they cant covered evrything we want to know .on the othe thing,when we only thoug listening somthing,and make decision,it is always very pernally,cant remind every's mind. at above ,i think it is unwise to make a decistion only by looking or listeng something at the first site
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