文章衔接手法恰当;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文中词汇表达丰富度要提升,可是单词拼写错误稍多。
With the development of society,more and more peole are used to make a choice fisrt without no seconds or mintues. it is very unwise to make a conclusion at the site of something. On one thing ,the perface are always very simple ,they cant covered evrything we want to know .on the othe thing,when we only thoug listening somthing,and make a decision,it is always very personally,cant respect every's mind. At above ,I think it is unwise to make a decistion only by looking or listening something at the first sit
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