文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累高级词汇;语句间的衔接不是很自然;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
In our life, everyone needs friends, so how to make the friend is very important. If you want to make the friend, first you need friendly to other,and take care other more than care about myself. Don't see the other at feature.If you have problem, you can negotiate with other,nonetheless don't dispute .