高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

long long ago .my hometown was very beautiful,the trees in everywhere.The fishes in rivers,it is happy. The house were ugly,everyone were hard working.Now,we live in high house.the cars in everywhere.But,the trees disapear.arm was pullotion,the fishes less and less.So.we need save it.it is nervous.I hope she can become beautiful.Let's go for it!