内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
In my childhood, the computer is not very popular. So we do a lot of funny thing without computer. It has a lot of communication and communion with my friend and classmate. And it has a lot of memorable things in my childhood. I have a lot of funny things in my childhood. When I was 4 years old, my old brother with me play video game every weekend. Such like “Super Mario” and “Snow Brother”. In the summer, we do something about fishing: first, we had gone to find a dark and damp place to get some earthworms. Then we made some fishing rod by long woods. And we take a small keg and a big vat to hold earthworms and fishes or shrimps. Finally, we take all of the fish equipment go to river and fishing here. In the winner, when the snow big enough, we build a snow men and have a snowball fight. We had a lot of fun with those games and it be still fresh in my memory. In the other hand, in we childhood doesn’t have some computer around us so we play the some original games. For example, we play the “Marbles Shoot Game” with my friends (each boy take a marble armed the other boy’s marble and shoot it). Even it is so dirty, but we still like to play it. And also, we had play some dangerous game. For just an example, we play “Run Rooms” every week(the rule likes in a small space, push other boys body out of line, your group are win). It is danger and provocative. And we also played some game like Ping Pang, basketball, and football. Those games much cheaper cost and we have place can play it. It makes me had a happy childhood. In my memory, we played a lot of games, but I don’t know how to say it in English. Here just has a little of samples. These games to accompany me with my childhood. And it makes me remember a lot friend with my childhood, it is a good memory for me.