内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
In my childhood, the computer is not very popular. So we did some funny things without computer. It has a great communication and communion with my friend and classmate. And it has a lot of memorable things in my childhood. I have a lot of funny things in my childhood. When I was 4 years old, my old brother with me played video game every weekend. Such like “Super Mario” and “Snow Brother”. In the summer, we do something about fishing: first, we had gone to find a dark and damp place to get some earthworms. Then we made two fishing rods by long woods. And we take a small keg and a big vat to hold earthworms and fishes or shrimps. Finally, we take all of the fish equipment go to river and fishing here. In the winner, when the snow big enough, we build a snow man and have a snowball fight. We had a lot of fun with those games and it was still fresh in my memory. On the other hand, in we childhood doesn’t have some computers around us so we play original games. For example, we play the “Marbles Shoot Game” with my friends (each boy takes a marble to armed the other boy’s marble and shoot it). Even it is so dirty, but we still like to play it. And also, we had playing some dangerous games. For just an example, we play “Run Rooms” every week(the rule likes in a small space, push other boys body out of line, your group are winner). It is dangerous and provocative. And we also played some games like Ping Pang, basketball, and football. Those games much cheaper cost and we have place can play it. It makes me to had a happy childhood. In my memory, we played a lot of games, but I don’t know how to say it in English. These games accompany me with my childhood. And it makes me remember a lot friend with my childhood, it is a good memory for me.