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i used to lived in the beautiful and the small little town around with green tree. in river, the water is so clear , you can see the fish swimming here, some of them are playing game.the home that people live is small and old, the street is also narrowed and old.Human lived in hard word life.But now, everything is changed.the high tall building you can see everywhere.in the street , the car cross like swimming fish.with the deep development of industry,the environment become more and more wrose.people cut down the tree and the litte fish also disappered,the environment pollute is no time to delay