2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

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With the development of traveling inderstary,more and more people are interested in visiting some famous universities,such as Beijing university and Zhongshan university.But this tendency brings about many problems.Here are some of ideas. First of all,whether the visitors are welcome for these universities.As we all know,university is a place that provides students with resouces about knowledge.These visitors may make noisy and destory the beautiful campus.While somebody have defferent ideas.They think visiting the university can arouse their wonderful memories and encourage their children study more hardly. For the view of my own,it is a good opportunity to make a good impression on the visitors,and encourage people to work hard. Above of all,everyone should behave themselves and keep polite.