上下文衔接稍显不流畅;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Making conclusions shortly after what you've saw or heard(smelled,etc) of one particular scene/sound(odor,and so on..)seems,more often,unwisable and prones to fallibility. For example, in an arid desert, people, exhuasted and thirsty, have a propensity to mistaken mirage for the oasis. several reasons can pin our idea. first, the information we have is insufficient to draw a conclusion.
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