作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。
Making conclusions shortly after what you've saw or heard(smelled,etc) of one particular scene/sound(odor,and so on..)seems,more often,unwise and is prone to fallibility. For example, in an arid desert, people, exhuasted and thirsty, have a propensity to mistaken mirage for the oasis. several reasons can pin our idea. first, the information we have is insufficient to draw a conclusion.
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