2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Making conclusions shortly after what you've saw or heard(smelled,etc) of one particular scene/sound(odor,and so on..)seems,more often,unwise and is prone to fallibility. For example, in an arid desert, people, exhausted and thirsty, have a propensity to mistaken mirage for the oasis. Several reasons can support this idea. First, the information we have is insufficient to draw a conclusion.