拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
March 1st,2016 Dear Sir or Madame I'm writing to apply for the position of volunteer interpreter for the Beijing Olympic games. My name is Li Ming which is a 18 years old boy.I am studying in the XX university .I have a good command of English and have a keen interest in sport. In addition ,I ready to help others due to my friendly appreciate .I want to contribute to Olympic games so I will do my best to do this work . thank you for your consideration to my litters .