高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。

I had a dream.It's very terror.It's made me feeling fear. I can't remember clearly when I wake up.I only remember I had a new friend called Miaomiao.She is a girl.We had trouble.Everybody was....I don't konw how description,like ghosts and monsters on the body.We were run.We run to near a lake.In fact,it's magical lake.We found we in lake central.Most people the west side is gone to from east side of lake.They are well."Look!It's well.I think we could the west side is gone to from east side of lake"I tell Miaomiao.But,she said"No,I don't think so.This is magical lake,maybe the people were ghosts and monsters on their body.This not real.I think resist against walk is well.I go and have a try"she came there.She loud"This is well!come on!"I ran to go over.I relaxed but! at the monent I found Miaomiao's carry on back is cyan.Maybe me too.Then,we experienced a lot.The dream is very true.So I'm very fear!