拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
With the advent of vehicle, industry and many other development, we are producing much pollution to the nature. Some species even died out or at the edge of extinct. There must be some thing we should do to stop the depressing state. Everyone belongs the earth, all of us can contribute to the protection. Planting trees can be a function way. In addition, the other realistic action is just making every water, paper, wood and other resource count. Maybe our contribution is tiny but also will be a huge step only if everyone moves on. Individual power if limited, as a contrast, governments will be more powerful. Most pollution comes from factories, so govern them strictly can be effective. Meanwhile many people still lack of knowledge about the importance of saving our earth, they should be evoked by some speeches or particular activities. It will never be late to do something to resave our nature. It must be a long trip that give back the creatures what they deserved in natural.