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拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。
With the advent of vehicle, industry and many other developments, we are producing much pollution to the nature. Some species even died out or at the edge of extinction. There must be something we should do to stop the depressing state. Everyone belongs the earth, so all of us can contribute to the protection. Planting trees can be a function way. In addition, the other realistic action is just making every water, paper, wood and other resource count. Maybe our contribution is tiny but also will be a huge step only if everyone moves on. Individual power if limited, as a contrast, governments will be more powerful. Masses of pollution comes from factories, so govern them strictly can be effective. Meanwhile many people still lack of knowledge about the importance of saving our earth, they should be evoked by some speeches or particular activities. It will never be late to do something to save our nature. It must be a long trip that give back the creatures what they deserved in nature.
