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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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With the development of the science and technology , computer is more and more important for the humanbeings,but it also have diadvantages for people. As we all know ,we can do many things with computer .It makes our lives comfortable.Since using the computer,we can communicate with each other who do not leave their own home. It allows us to learn more about the world in time . Also we can find what we want to find. But it is also useless for us,it makes us shortlight if we are on the computer long time . Some students take much time to play games on tne computer,therefore ,they fallbehind others. In my opinion ,we should use computers properly .It should make our lives more useful .

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