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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40884[网页划词已开启]
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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With the development of sociality,young people became more and more self-conscious.They are used to draw conclusions by what they seen or hear immediately without thinking it deeply and carefully.In my opinion,it's not very unsafe for them to get the right answer according to two reasons which are following. For one hand,the circumstance they have been through might be just a special period of time.It's unreasonable to make your decisions without deeply thinking.For another hand,what have you seen or hear may lie to you occasionally.It may lead you to a wrong direction and you can't wake up until you make a big mistake. In balance,we should prevent ourselves from drawing conclusion thoughtless.Views from other people will have a great effect to keep you away from narrow mind.It's wise for us to search some materials from the Internet before we draw a conclusion which can make our decisions more objective.Only in this way,can we have a more healthy life!

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