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With the development of sociality,young people became more and more self-conscious.They are used to draw conclusions by what they seen or hear immediately without thinking it deeply and carefully.In my opinion,it's not very unsafe for them to get the right answer according to two reasons which are following. For one hand,the circumstance they have been through might be just a special period of time.It's unreasonable to make your decisions without deeply thinking.For another hand,what have you seen or hear may lie to you occasionally.It may lead you to a wrong direction and you can't wake up until you make a big mistake. In balance,we should prevent ourselves from drawing conclusion thoughtless.Views from other people will have a great effect to keep you away from narrow mind.It's wise for us to search some materials from the Internet before we draw a conclusion which can make our decisions more objective.Only in this way,can we have a more healthy life!
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