高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown has changed a lot over the past ten years.When I was a child,there were a lot of trees surrounding the town.The river is clear and the fishes were swimming happily.The streets were narrow and the houses were not beautiful.People who lived in the town worked hard and lived an difficult life.Now,tall builings are all over the town.Drivers are driving on the street.But the trees and fishes are reducing rapidly.We must try our best to prevent the environment from being destroyed.