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My hometown is Tonghua, it is a very small village. The city located in Jilin province. It is a nice city,people are friendly, when spring coming you can climb the mountains and go sightseeing rivers, you can go fishing in the summer, In autumn you can walking on the yard. it is so exciting to feel. The best season is winter, you can skating and eat hot pot. The famous place is Wunv mountain.it is the best mountain in my hometown,more girls like singing at the top of mountain,in the mountain you can see all views. The best food is bake meat.you can buy more meat to eat and felt in this hometown.
