单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl.She has big eyes and black hair.She is taller than I.Her temper is very good.She often helped me when i need some help.We always get together to do our homework on weekend.She is good at English,so I often ask some question to her.