文章衔接手法恰当;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
It is not wise drawing conclusion for what you viewing and listing. There are too much false appearance in society,for example,at the railway station ,there are somebody away enthusiasm to you ,they help you booking hotel ,actually,they also deceive you.Living just like magic,it is not really for what you looking.you need analysis and reappraisal for anything.It can protect your rights and keep away from ban man. It is not bad enough to drawing a conclusion for consider anything more time.those can help you get a wise decision
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