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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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全文结构较为严谨;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

With the development of Internet ,making friend online is an important way of making friend. Making friend online have benifit of saving money and convenience,however, to a certain extent, have risks. Firstly,the benifit of saving money and convenience. It's convenience that you can make friend where they are,without he or she is living in your city or in your country's other cities,what's more,he or she is international friend. Furthermore, broadband fee is cheaper than telephone rate and communication expense. The two benifit,personally,are the important part of making friend. Secondly, with the coming of information age,some dating site are dragons and fishes jumbled together.When we making friend online,we better to identify true or false,in cast of taking for a ride, so that lose money and threatened the safety of ourselves. All in all,we should keep our head with enjoy the convenience of making friend online.

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