全文结构较为严谨;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
With the development of Internet ,making friend online is an important way of making friend. Making friend online have benifit of saving money and convenience,however, to a certain extent, have risks. Firstly,the benifit of saving money and convenience. It's convenience that you can make friend where they are,without he or she is living in your city or in your country's other cities,what's more,he or she is international friend. Furthermore, broadband fee is cheaper than telephone rate and communication expense. The two benifit,personally,are the important part of making friend. Secondly, with the coming of information age,some dating site are dragons and fishes jumbled together.When we making friend online,we better to identify true or false,in cast of taking for a ride, so that lose money and threatened the safety of ourselves. All in all,we should keep our head with enjoy the convenience of making friend online.
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