能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
With the development of Internet,making friend online is an important way of making friend. Making friend online has benifit of saving money and convenience,however, to a certain extent, take risks. Firstly,the benefit of saving money and convenience. It's convenient that you can make friend where they are,without he or she is living in your city or in your country's other cities,what's more,he or she is international friend. Furthermore, broadband fee is cheaper than telephone rate and communication expense. The two benefit,personally,are the important part of making friend. Secondly, with the coming of information age,some dating site are dragons and fishes jumbled together.When we making friend online,we better to identify true or false,in cast of taking for a ride, so that we lose money and threatened the safety of ourselves. All in all,we should keep own head with enjoy the convenience of making friend online.
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