2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Heighten your quality of life Nowadays physical life in big cities can easily satisfies inhabitants there； however, feelings of happiness and comforting have been decreasing in recent years. Urban living seems not so comforting and attractive as we thought before. Reasons for this problem will be analyzed below. First of all, pollution of the environment affects the life quality in large cities mostly. Except for the insurmountable air pollution causing by the over-amount of private cars, there are insidious kind of pollution around us that we hardly ever noticed but really do harm to our health. Noise pollution, for instance, is quite a critical pollution that invades our daily life at every minute. Car alarms going off at any time of the day or night, high volume of television and annoyance dogs’ barking are always around us, thus hardly can we enjoy peaceful life in large cities. People in large cities are less healthy than those in rural area is another typical factor of unban living. We are eating pesticides in every time we think we are eating fresh salads and vegetables. Besides, quick pace of living leaves city dwellers little time for having meals, hence, junk food and quick-meal every day causes serious malnutrition among people, especially working people. In addition, heavy work exerts high pressure on working people in large cities. Complicated relationships, pressure from work and family, the lack of confidence in life, etc. All these features inflict stress on those young people. Consequently, increasing pressure occupies the time and space which should be used to smell the flowers and enjoy relaxing life. It sounds like unban living has nothing good. Actually we needn’t worry too much for things are getting better now. Solutions to these problems are found and have been implemented gradually. Cars releasing less polluting gas are about to utilize in big cities as what we call green technology are developing quickly these years. More and more trees, which absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, are planted. As for the health problem, government are doing their best to enhance people’s consciousness of keeping healthy by popularizing the relevant knowledge and establishing more exercise facilities. What’s more, people in large cities should learn to release pressure in tense life by themselves. Going hiking or exercising every day can easily relaxes body and mind. In conclusion, in order to heighten the quality of life in large cities requires everybody’s help. Less pollution and more fresh air, less pressure and more entertainment, life will be much better I believe.