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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句。
There is a heat debate that how to be wiser consumer by using coupon recently.As we all know,most of us prefer to buy things which have a discount for sales.However,In my opinion, i think that is not a wise way to spend money buy using coupon . For one hand ,we make purchase of unwanted goods。 because we have coupon.Before we go shopping ,we should make a list that is very helpful for us to save money.For another hand,i learn from my maths teacher who has experience to buy expensive shoes that price The price raise by dark-minded merchant .Even she enjoy the discount ,the price of shoes is more higher than original cost.We are looking for coupon,group-buy,discount and buying everything we don't want ,perhaps we are trapped in a trick set by merchant. To a conclusion , as a consumer, we should pay attention to its original price before we buy things.To be a wiser consumer.we should reduce to buy unwanted things.
