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The Green Road Garden is the most attractive place to see in Zhongshan. If my foreign friend is planing to pay a visit to my hometown,I would highly recommand it to him/her. Green Road Garden is located at the countryside of Zhongshan,surrounded by beautiful mountains and peaceful lakes.Breathing the fresh air, you can immediately throw all the stress and annoyance behind your head.It's a best way to relax yourself after the busy life in weekdays. On the other hand,it's also good for your health to take a bike and have a short exploy into the garden.People can not only share happy time with their friends, but also see as much attractive scenes as they want. Last but not the least, after having a tour on cyclebike, you can enjoy the delicious "tofu dessert" at the restaurant.The dessert is served in diverse cooking style. In Cantonese style, the dessert tastes sweet.However, it will be sour in Northen style, as vinegar will be added. As far as I concern, the Green Road Garden shows the most unforgettable natural environment of my hometown, it's a connection between nature and human,it will absolutely impress my foreign friends.