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i have a good friend. some times, he will not do his homework because of playing games, i will let him to copy mine. a weeks ago, i felt silly so i can't go to school. but there is one of most class i missed. after class, Zhou came to my home and told me the contents clarified in the class. i feel so excited and appricated. thank you so much!