作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
Good friend! Every one of us must have friends in your life, but as for 'good friend', maybe only one or two will become your friends who can help you no matter what happened. During my kindergarded life, there have been a guy who live so close to me and help me so much in daily work walked close to my life. First, please allow me to present my friend to you. His name is Zhou, a very smart boy and so easy to go with.