2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力。

My hometown is Xiamen, so if I have a foreign freiend I will take him/she to visit Xiamen. As we kown,Xiamen is a zone of ecnomic, and it ia a beautiful city that has many delicious food.Such as shacha noodle, dry of meet, tusundong and so on. Beside that, Xiamen also is a famouse travel site. Especially, Gulang island is one of famous spite in China. Every year, the island alway gethers many people from all over the world, and it has mang foreign business,and I think if the foreign friend goes to it, he/she may find the sense of close. what's more, the island also has many food that is bring ares chelectercal. So, if my foreign friend comes to Xiamen, I can promise that he/she may fall in love the beautiful city.