2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My dear friends, I'm glade to meet you in my hometown. Here I'd like to gave you some impress on it. My hometown is a beautiful city,with almost 2000 years history. This give her some difference to other cities in north China. Some famous people were wildly known becaus their inflous in the history. I believe these stories about them will abstrict you deeply.