可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;作者词汇表达不够灵活,拼写错误比较多;采用了一些简单的从句。
it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket in the big environment of market economy, it is not wise to put all eggs in a basket. we should put our eggs into different baskets. that means people shouldn't put all their many in the same investment produt. that is unwiise because the high risk it will bear. the wise man always put his eggs into different baskets. these different baskets doesn't mean what they seemed to be. the criteria of dfferece is depending on how risky the basket will break.