题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。
Communication is the bridge though our people. Just as the saying goes "communication with the world, you will get the world." Men is now facing a big problem, communication though online which is becoming more and more serious. Communication is very important expercialy face to face then you can feel his motive clearly. Surfing online have become fashion in the whole world, people have few time communication though face to face, they often use valide communication tools, such as QQ and facebook, but you cannot feel each realy though the word translation online. There are some reasone to support my view that commmunication with others will make a humorious society. Firstly, communication to other will share you idea and motion which will make you feel happy. Then communication will decrease the mistake among you life. Last but not the least, communication with you realatives and friends will increase positive idea in you life. In a word, say no to communication though online and donot wast the time in the valide wold.