作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰。
I have a good friend that influenced me most in school, her name is Linda,who is really devoted to reading .She is good at English. She often helps me. Once upon a time,I was not so confident about my study . However,things virtually begin to change when She went to great lengths to encourage me. Under her influence,I start to crazy about study .I really appreciate her help. I regained confidence in learning ,understanding that workhard is always the key to success.