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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36952
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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I have a good friend that influenced me most in school, her name is Linda,who is really devoted to reading .She is good at English. She often helps me. Once upon a time,I was not so confident about my study . However,things virtually begin to change when She went to great lengths to encourage me. Under her influence,I start to crazy about study .I really appreciate her help. I regained confidence in learning ,understanding that workhard is always the key to success.

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