作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章层次较为清晰。
I have a good friend that influenced me most in school,her name is Linda,who is really devoted to reading.She is good at English.She often helps me.Once upon a time,I was not so confident about my study.However,things virtually begin to change when she went to great lengths to encourage me.Under her influence,I start to crazy about study.I really appreciate her help.I regained confidence in learning ,understand that workhard is always the key to success.