英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11296
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分51.5分
评语:

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章词汇表达稍显呆板,请灵活使用高级词汇,避免拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

With the development of technology ande economy, more and more communication we need, to express our mind, plan, emotion, and so on. So the mobile phone is wildly used. It is obviously that the increasing use of mobile phone promopt the development of economy. But on the other hand, overusing of mobile phone causes many troubles also. As we have seen, many people now lose themselve to the phone and many others are tired of the information polution.

会员评论0个评论)
cnlm
金币:27

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:85.0莫莫20090936

人气:20发布:2016-06-15

得分:85.01531282859

人气:52发布:2016-12-15

得分:84.5ALIreader

人气:47发布:2014-12-07

得分:84.5baochaoxilanhua

人气:62发布:2017-04-06

得分:84.0AAA恒星梦

人气:72发布:2016-09-28