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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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评语:

适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

In the picture, we can see the couple is writing a meil to their child and said that they had long time no see their child who was on the upstairs, and hopede to eating with their child. From the picture, I want to say the coummunication not replace the face-to-face contact. As we know, with the development of electronic communication, our life becomes more and more convnient. For instance, have it, our communication can not limit by the distance and improve the effect of the contact. But cion has two saide. Althougt the electronic communication makes our life becomes more easy, bute it not replac the face-to-face. firstly, you can see the emotion of the talker by face-to-face communication. Secondly, a phone not can througt the miss because our parents need company. Last but not least, face -to-face communication can make our more closely. In a word, we shouldn't adopte the way of face-to-face because we have the electronic communication.

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