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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

As the faster improvement of the world's step,more and more technological tools could be used by person today.There is a normal example in our life what most of people are handing a cellphone or more,which leads to watch TV and play games instead of contact with others.Most serious phenomenon what they can't live without is coming out.They just low down their heads when they are walking or eating and so on.But is that we really want this life? I doubt it! We can't lose our friendship and our family,only if we talk to them and lisen to their voice by heart.I am not saying that the world development is fail.I only want to say what we shouldn't spend most of our time to take it . Conmunication is still significant in real life,which we shall cherish it and do it.

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