2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

With the delelppment of the thechnology,the computer entered people's life.Become an indiapensable part in people's life.But every thing havs two sides.On the one hand,it has help our learning,let us quick konwing the word,we can contract someone with the compurter no matter where he is.through the compurter you can buy the goods. On the other hand,people use computers to steal other people's privacy,do some illegal thing.Many student becomes addicted to compurter games ruined school. It follows that,people should be reasonable use the compurter.Let it serve us.learning to live more convenient and more quickly.