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作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The advance of be careful with our money With the devolopment of socity.Nowadays,more and more students have their own money.and at the sames they are very careful about their money.some people think It's a good for students.However,others ont.they believe that may not make us smart consumers.As far as I'm concerned.I think careful with our money have many advances. First of all.be careful with our money we can get into a good habit of economy.Secondly,we can do lots of things,which we want to do.Last but not least.we can reduce the pressure of our parents what's more we can devolop our independence. In a world,There are lots of benifits to our life.we should learn to careful with our money.
