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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中有几处句子错误；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。
HOW TO BE A SMART CONSUMERS In mu opinions, i dont not think it is a good way to deal with the money in the daily life by most students nowadays. as a colleage student,i also usually use my money carefully in a daily life,and i still believe that way is most properly for me untill a bad thing happended to me.one day,i bough a clouth on the taobao web site as usual, but when i recieved the clouth i foud that is not the same clouth as the picture on the site,an then,i asked the sailer for my questions,she told me you can not buy the same clouth as you see by a so cheap price,if you don not like,just sent it back to me,i silence.at the moment,i relize that save money is not a bad thing,but you buy everthing in this way,you can just annoyed yourself. For my another experience is happend on my friend,in a special's day,she get a conpons of 30yuan about a store,she told me happily to go shopping there,but when we arrived there we found that we have to cost over 200yuan can we use this kind of conpons,so she finally cost almost three humdred. We should not to save money just for save money,for some things we can value the price carefully ,but there also have some things you can not save your money at all.
