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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3375
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Honesty is one of the most sprits in our life, which the only way leading success. Honesty is not only especially important to business men but also important to our people. We all told to be honesty when we were young, but why us should be that men. Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows, the first one is that to be an honest person will make your life more harmonious and feel trusted by your friends. Besides if we live in the world with cheating then lots of untrue information in our life. The third reason is only to be a honesty child can we make a successful life, no matter what occupation you are. With reference to my standpoint, I think all of us will to be a honesty person.

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